You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish.
Write a letter to the admissions tutor:
explain your position.
apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day.
ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.
Dear Mrs Jones,
In this letter, I am writing to apologize that it is impossible for me to participate in the interview tomorrow evening for the following reasons. However, I intend to take the computer programming course in Cambridge University.
Tomorrow morning I am leaving at 6:00 am for Almaty to join my brother's graduation from National University. Although I have tried to skip this event, my family insists on my presence. As a result, I have to change my plans regarding our appointment. Nevertheless, it would be great, if you postpone it till the next week, so that I would not to miss the opportunity to enroll for the important course.
It would also be useful, if you share some details about the upcoming interview. First of all, I want to know how long it will last. I need to be aware of it in order to fit it in my tight schedule. Secondly, I would like you to say whether the meeting will require me to take an examination. This information would enable me to prepare well for it.
You can either send a message to my email address or call me on the following number. I look forward to your reply as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely,
Tolegen
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65402843602 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77834279697 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620853080569 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1129687438 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1428571429 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 4.34317383033 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147095072975 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467453557947 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270877529836 0.0603063233224 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0838965808481 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115775625984 0.0580467560999 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.