You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish.
Write a letter to the admissions tutor:
• explain your position
• apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day.
• ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it
Dear Mrs. Smith,
I am inscribing this epistle to draw your attention towards not attending the college interview as I have to conduct another important appointment with the physician at the similar time.
Although, I am working at the assistant manager position at Canadore college. I completed 2 years at this institute and this is an honour for me to be invited at the interview of your college program of marketing that is the dream course of everyone to get enrolled. However, unluckily, I had already booked an appointment with family clinician two months before and now the time clashes between both. As a result, I am unable to come at your fixed time.So, I apologise for this inconvenience but promise to join this meeting an hour after the schedule at the same day if possible because both sides weightage equally for me.
Furthermore, I want to know about the details related to this session such as any pretest or post test and lastly the time schedule set for it.
I await for a favourable response.
Yours sincerely,
abc
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the physician at the similar time. Although, I am working at the assistant manager ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 455, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
... I am unable to come at your fixed time.So, I apologise for this inconvenience but...
^^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e both sides weightage equally for me. Furthermore, I want to know about the de...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 875.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88826815642 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74948888855 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664804469274 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.568697469 44.8134815571 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.375 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 16.8248392259 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.875 4.34317383033 181% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247181229209 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881549260107 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590691882593 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11332282637 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0820544090685 0.0580467560999 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.