You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment, you cannot come at the time they wish.
Write a letter to the admissions tutor:
explain your position
apologise and offer to come on another day or later the same day.
ask how long the interview will be and whether there will be any tests during it.
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to convey my regret because of allotted time of interview for me causes a conflict with my general health checkup appointment on the same day and time. Therefore, please consider to offer me an alternative appointment. I would be grateful to attend on any later slots or even on any other following day.
Actually, nature of my part-time job requires a monthly health checkup report for hygienic reason. Thus, they not only organized a checkup on February 5th 10 AM but also, I have agreed for it based on my day-off. Because of this, I would not be able to attend the placement interview to pursue environment science course at Hammersmith University of London. Therefore, I request you to kindly consider it to reschedule my interview time to any other time on the same day, even if it is going to be late evening. Nonetheless, please do not hesitate to reschedule it on any following day. Because, I have another day-off to take.
Thanks in advance for your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Yusa
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider offering'.
Suggestion: consider offering
...he same day and time. Therefore, please consider to offer me an alternative appointment. I would ...
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Line 5, column 588, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... to reschedule it on any following day. Because, I have another day-off to take. Tha...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85393258427 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80860671559 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61797752809 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7266666628 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5454545455 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188144676721 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671457594671 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388834350158 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121741893749 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0308304513897 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.