You have just read an article in an inernational travel magazie which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.
Write a letter to the editor of magazie. IN your letter
- Correct the information in the article
- Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
- Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir,
Recently, I have read an article in your travel magazine “Lonely Planet” – August 2019 edition, covering travel to remote destinations in india. Since, I am a native of the town mentioned in the article, I realized some facts were misstated and wanted to draw your attention to the incorrect data.
it is mentioned in the article that Nandyal, a remote town in Andhra Pradesh in india, is only connected by road. this is factually incorrect, Nandyal has a train junction administered by Southern Central railways and has active commuters using train regularly. it is imperative for your magazine to provide accurate travel mode for international diaspora of the region to consider bringing back their families and children to visit, who may otherwise avoid to visit due to cumbersome travel experiences via gravel roads. Nandyal is well-connected with roadways and railways offering several options on timings.
I would request the editing team to correct this mistake and republish this article in September 2019 edition.
Your sincerely,
Rita Ampte
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...r attention to the incorrect data. it is mentioned in the article that Nandya...
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Line 9, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...sh in india, is only connected by road. this is factually incorrect, Nandyal has a t...
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Line 9, column 263, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...active commuters using train regularly. it is imperative for your magazine to prov...
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Line 9, column 453, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'avoid visiting'.
Suggestion: avoid visiting
...nd children to visit, who may otherwise avoid to visit due to cumbersome travel experiences vi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, may, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 930.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47058823529 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89958832539 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676470588235 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3878994678 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.25 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.875 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198623357524 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759179453849 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545517790568 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123643005323 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740456282693 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 8.37731958763 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 70.7449484536 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 8.71597938144 166% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 7.59969072165 134% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.