You have just received a credit card statement from your bank The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make Write a letter to the bank manager In the letter Introduce yourself Explain that you did not buy the items

Essay topics:

You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.

Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:
• Introduce yourself.
• Explain that you did not buy the items listed.
• Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am one of your bank’s Visa credit holder. I am writing to you Today to report an anonymous transaction added in my January 2020 credit card bill. I am very disappointed to see an unknown purchase list attached to my Monthly bill.

Firstly, I was startled seeing my due amount for the first Month of this Year. Thus, I went through the bill and found five different charges of buying some items from various places in Denmark. I am confident it is not me because last whole month I was away from London to Italy on a business trip. I could submit some references of my presence at Italy as an evidence such as, flight to and fro tickets, hotel bookings. Consequently, I doubt someone has hacked my credit card details. Therefore, I want you to block my credit card immediately and do a diligence check on these transaction. After that, waiver these transaction from my bill and issue me a new bill reflecting my actual last month transactions with a new credit card.

Thank you for your prompt action on this matter and fulfilling my request.

Yours faithfully,
Sayu

Votes
Average: 8.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 149, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ed in my January 2020 credit card bill. I am very disappointed to see an unknown ...
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Line 5, column 574, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this transaction' or 'these transactions'?
Suggestion: this transaction; these transactions
...immediately and do a diligence check on these transaction. After that, waiver these transaction f...
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Line 5, column 612, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this transaction' or 'these transactions'?
Suggestion: this transaction; these transactions
...n these transaction. After that, waiver these transaction from my bill and issue me a new bill re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, thus, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67179487179 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65621224883 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651282051282 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2677863229 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9166666667 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15837427876 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637545413914 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491076806724 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124912361065 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282023548773 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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