You have a problem with the neighbour Write a letter to your neighbour In your Letter Describe the problem Say how long it has been a problem Explain what action you want the neighbour to take

Essay topics:

You have a problem with the neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your Letter:
Describe the problem
Say how long it has been a problem
Explain what action you want the neighbour to take.

Dear John,
I am writing this letter to let you know that there is some leakage problem in my washroom , as the pipe of your house is interconnected with our washroom's ceiling. Because of this, we are not able to use washroom, as there is dripping of water all the day.
Let me explain the situation in detail. We have been suffering from this problem from the last five days. We even tried to connect you, but you were not at home , and we got to know that you are on vacations. Even though, I called the plumber and showed him the whole situation, the leakage and water dripping from pipe.
Considering this problem, it is my humble request to you to repair the pipe as soon as possible. Perhaps, we will not be able to meet when u will come, as i have some urgent work out of town. So, please call the plumber and try to repair the pipe whenever you will come back home.
I hope you will do it quickly.
Best regards,
Nancy

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear John, I am writing this letter to let you know...
^^^
Line 2, column 91, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...e is some leakage problem in my washroom , as the pipe of your house is interconne...
^^
Line 3, column 160, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...to connect you, but you were not at home , and we got to know that you are on vaca...
^^
Line 6, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e you will do it quickly. Best regards, Nancy
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27683615819 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24346023431 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610169491525 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7418275269 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8181818182 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197831271444 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688914893388 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665591093265 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118332948924 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359512455714 0.0580467560999 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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