you have to read in your local newspaper that there has been an increase in the amount of crime committed by young people.
Write a letter to the newspaper. In your letter
* explain what crimes are common in your area
* say why you think young people are committing these crimes
* suggest what you think should be done about this problem.
Write 150 words, Begin your letter as follows: To the Editor
To the Editors,
I am writing in response to your recent article on crime. In Pinrang, there have been also many problems about crime. Actually, last year, my village in Pinrang whose name is Corawali was robbed. In the morning, I saw my neighbors who got together in front of Erin’s house. All of things in house were gone. Unfortunately, there was a robbery took her things. Her family and Erni were sad.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
...y do it? It is because they do not have job. Again, they do it because it’s one way...
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: ONE_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use the numeral 'one' with plural words. Did you mean 'one way', 'a way', or simply 'ways'?
Suggestion: one way; a way; ways
...ave job. Again, they do it because it’s one ways for getting money. I hope they can g...
^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['actually', 'also', 'if', 'so', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.218905472637 0.220444632235 99% => OK
Verbs: 0.194029850746 0.167888034529 116% => OK
Adjectives: 0.044776119403 0.0606518309736 74% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0597014925373 0.0506257000042 118% => OK
Pronouns: 0.10447761194 0.118615021944 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0995024875622 0.107062808482 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0398009950249 0.041066498444 97% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.46088040613 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00995024875622 0.0385302599488 26% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0398009950249 0.0714148451538 56% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0199004975124 0.0191574576366 104% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0248756218905 0.00930345855455 267% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 983.0 1141.60824742 86% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.134020619 84% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68208092486 5.53046319177 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78085437643 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.300578034682 0.284621296913 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.21387283237 0.211203875043 101% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.132947976879 0.133321485273 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0809248554913 0.0843313296314 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46088040613 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653179190751 0.622163163488 105% => OK
Word variations: 64.8956327636 62.8969750728 103% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 12.9587628866 123% => OK
Sentence length: 10.8125 16.4300151701 66% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.4624034361 44.7399317507 52% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.4375 90.9928171075 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.8125 16.4300151701 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.3125 0.613754768223 51% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 7.22680412371 83% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Readability: 32.199783237 37.5504026743 86% => OK
Elegance: 1.0 1.13073093955 88% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184174821306 0.331212695627 56% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.149678086683 0.0927372745006 161% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.11299770314 0.0736520305886 153% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.582743497319 0.662452444078 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.230273247233 0.233577193048 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665340079051 0.122183219658 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781172384143 0.0765303033291 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.107119601468 0.110270004696 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.15858879251 0.120535355502 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084597913412 0.120397337282 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0967507047559 0.113578534861 85% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.45360824742 40% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.48453608247 472% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.0206185567 149% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 4.54639175258 44% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 1.0824742268 370% => OK
Neutral topic words: 4.0 2.62886597938 152% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 8.25773195876 121% => OK
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Rates: 68.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.0 Out of 9
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 15 10
No. of Words: 166 200
No. of Characters: 721 1000
No. of Different Words: 105 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.589 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.343 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.304 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 40 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 30 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 17 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 11.067 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 3.714 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.267 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.337 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.511 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.146 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4