You have recently gone to live in a new city Write a letter to your English speaking friend In your letter you should explain why you have gone to live in the new city you should describe the place where you are living also invite your friend to come and

Dear John
How are you?I am Hale and hearty. I hope you are sailing in the same boat. I am writing this letter to inform you that I am transferring to the rst city as you know that I borrowed a house there.
John, you know that the rst city is updated as compared to city where I lived now. As you know the government is replacing the old buildings in the city and my house is one of them in the government replacement list houses. Moreover I have to travel to rst city for office as I transferred here last month.So, instead of searching a new house in same city I planned to buy a new house in rst city as it is few kilometers away from my office.
In addition to this I suggest you to brought a new house in my city as you know that government is updating the city with modern technology as whole city is under developing. So I hope you could also make your mind to transfer to city where I am transferring.
Looking forward for the response from your side.
Yours friend
Xyz

Votes
Average: 5.2 (3 votes)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
Dear John How are you?I am Hale and hearty. I hope you are sail...
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Line 2, column 76, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... hope you are sailing in the same boat. I am writing this letter to inform you th...
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Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I lived now. As you know the government is replacing the old buildings in the ci...
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Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...the government replacement list houses. Moreover I have to travel to rst city for offic...
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Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oreover I have to travel to rst city for office as I transferred here last month...
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Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to rst city for office as I transferred here last month.So, instead of searching...
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Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...ffice as I transferred here last month.So, instead of searching a new house in sa...
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Line 4, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gy as whole city is under developing. So I hope you could also make your mind to ...
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Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ponse from your side. Yours friend Xyz
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, in addition, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.16230366492 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47406436664 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497382198953 0.622605031667 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0532029794 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263562828647 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133230354746 0.0766984524023 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512972691795 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157257897935 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645704955953 0.0580467560999 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.85 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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