Dear John
How are you?I am Hale and hearty. I hope you are sailing in the same boat. I am writing this letter to inform you that I am transferring to the rst city as you know that I borrowed a house there.
John, you know that the rst city is updated as compared to city where I lived now. As you know the government is replacing the old buildings in the city and my house is one of them in the government replacement list houses. Moreover I have to travel to rst city for office as I transferred here last month.So, instead of searching a new house in same city I planned to buy a new house in rst city as it is few kilometers away from my office.
In addition to this I suggest you to brought a new house in my city as you know that government is updating the city with modern technology as whole city is under developing. So I hope you could also make your mind to transfer to city where I am transferring.
Looking forward for the response from your side.
Yours friend
Xyz
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 13, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
Dear John How are you?I am Hale and hearty. I hope you are sail...
^
Line 2, column 76, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... hope you are sailing in the same boat. I am writing this letter to inform you th...
^
Line 3, column 109, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I lived now. As you know the government is replacing the old buildings in the ci...
^^
Line 3, column 225, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...the government replacement list houses. Moreover I have to travel to rst city for offic...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oreover I have to travel to rst city for office as I transferred here last month...
^^
Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to rst city for office as I transferred here last month.So, instead of searching...
^^
Line 3, column 309, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...ffice as I transferred here last month.So, instead of searching a new house in sa...
^^
Line 4, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gy as whole city is under developing. So I hope you could also make your mind to ...
^^
Line 7, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ponse from your side. Yours friend Xyz
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, so, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.16230366492 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47406436664 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 127.690721649 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497382198953 0.622605031667 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.360824742268 277% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.0532029794 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263562828647 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133230354746 0.0766984524023 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512972691795 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157257897935 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645704955953 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.85 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.