Dear John,
I will let you know about my new job in Canada that i started last month.
First of all i was working as a Sales Manager for more than ten years at an international company in Turkey. Because of the negative economical circumstances in my country i was looking for a job opportunity more than 3 month sabroad especially in Canada.
Because i graduated from Environmental Engineering at the Technical University, i have sent a plethora of mails to Canadian Engineering companies. Consequently i had an positive e mail from one of that companies to do job interview via Skype. After second interview i was accepted from it to start work there. I started to work as a technical engineer in the plant.
When i moved to Canada 2 weeks ago with my wife we started new life. We started to live in a small house which has only a kitchen and a living room.
Let' s meet at the pub this weekend to discuss more in details.
Kind regards,
Can
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ou know about my new job in Canada that i started last month. First of all i w...
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...t i started last month. First of all i was working as a Sales Manager for more...
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Suggestion: economic
...pany in Turkey. Because of the negative economical circumstances in my country i was looki...
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... economical circumstances in my country i was looking for a job opportunity more ...
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...abroad especially in Canada. Because i graduated from Environmental Engineerin...
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...ails to Canadian Engineering companies. Consequently i had an positive e mail from one of th...
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...ian Engineering companies. Consequently i had an positive e mail from one of that...
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...gineering companies. Consequently i had an positive e mail from one of that compan...
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...ompanies to do job interview via Skype. After second interview i was accepted from it...
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...rview via Skype. After second interview i was accepted from it to start work ther...
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...s a technical engineer in the plant. When i moved to Canada 2 weeks ago with my w...
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...echnical engineer in the plant. When i moved to Canada 2 weeks ago with my wif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, look, second, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60115606936 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8488256196 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64161849711 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1991735443 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.3636363636 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7272727273 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.54545454545 4.34317383033 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138129998162 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506474660702 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448091548385 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757324468743 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600719086049 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.