Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inquire about the part-time position as a chef advertised in ‘The Evening Echo’ on 24th June.
As you can see from my enclosed CV, I have a lot of relevant experience in this field. Last year, I worked as a Head Chef at The Radisson Hotel, where I was in charge of 10 chefs. Also, I was a judge in a cooking competition.
It is a well-known restaurant in Manchester, working here would give a new recognition. Also, this restaurant is near to my house, so I don’t have to travel longer if I work here. In fact, the job timing is also 6-9 in the evening, which will not hamper my study as I have college till afternoon.
There are a number of reasons why I think I would be suitable for this job. First, I can cook a variety of cuisines which will include new items on your restaurant’s menu. Secondly, I can speak English and French, means sometimes I can do both taking orders and cooking food.
If you require any additional information, please do not hesitate to contact me. I look forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Yours faithfully,
Michael
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 282, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...do both taking orders and cooking food. If you require any additional informatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, i think, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5512195122 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81265094776 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653658536585 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0712245128 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7692307692 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168951462591 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525353048452 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286495922366 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.082211716558 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244958232271 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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