You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper You want to apply for the job Write a letter to the manager of the company In your letter provide information about yourself give details of your previous work experience say why the company should consider

Essay topics:

You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter
• provide information about yourself
• give details of your previous work experience
• say why the company should consider you for the job You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear …,

Dear Sir,
I am writing this to apply for job in your company, that is suitable for my skills. I think, I would be apt for this position. The notice about hiring for this position has come to my notice when I referred todays newspaper. Moreover, this is my dream company to work.

My name is Ria and my age is 22 years. Actually, I am doing my final year in Masters, in Business Management from JNTU university and also done my bachelor’s from the same university. As per my knowledge I have scored distinction in my bachelor’s and also maintained the same till this semester. In order to acquire practical knowledge with respect to theory, took internship for 6 months during my bachelor’s as business associate and also 6 months internship during master’s as Business Analyst. Besides, I can utilise all my experience and intelligence to make your company most profitable.

I would appreciate if you consider me for this position and I will never disappoint you.
Thanking you for considering my request. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Abc.

Votes
Average: 8.2 (5 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this to apply for job in yo...
^^^
Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...earing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Abc.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, if, look, moreover, so, i think, with respect to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91351351351 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9233399952 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2692160556 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.9230769231 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2307692308 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.61538461538 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175034981844 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784653864535 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608781445113 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126487149468 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0424098830863 0.0580467560999 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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