Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my interest in doing voluntary work at a progressing country. I will explain causes why I want to do it and my skills as well as experiences.
First of all, I want to learn new cultures and traditions which will make me think outside the box. Further and more importantly, besides getting international experiences, I want to develop inter-personal skills which will help me develop hich sense of individualism, self-esteem and self-reflection.
Secondly, I can speak German, English and Spanish fluently. I also hold first aid certificate consequently in an emergency I will assist in treating minor incidents. I had worked as waitress at Star Hotel for three months and I had worked as cleaner at Hilton Hotel for a year.
Finally, I would like to do it in Turkey or Iran where I can assist many refugees in speaking and reading foreign languages during six months from January,2020 to July,2020. I hope there will be a suitable openning for me.
Thank you for your assistance in this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Mary Brown
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 148, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'January 2020'.
Suggestion: January 2020
...oreign languages during six months from January,2020 to July,2020. I hope there will be a su...
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Line 9, column 164, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'July 2020'.
Suggestion: July 2020
... during six months from January,2020 to July,2020. I hope there will be a suitable openni...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97252747253 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11005028128 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.67032967033 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.8491530277 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2727272727 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 4.34317383033 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212522361646 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725740852702 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506376095636 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110697874467 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062982911617 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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