You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter
describe the situation
explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir or Madam,
I would like to complain for the arrangement of sharing room with another student.
I have been sharing my room with another student since a month ago. While I expect a quiet room for concentration of my study, my roommate intermittently produces noise and plays music which is unacceptably loud, causing me fail to study at my room.
Having reflected my dissatisfaction to my room mate, I have not seen any improvement but aggravation. My room mate does not reduce the noises made but instead continue producing it even at midnight. Subsequently, I have to stay in the library for all day long. Worse still, I could not even sleep at night due to the loud noise, which is completely detrimental to my health.
Hence, to avoid such problem, I sincerely request moving to a single room as soon as possible to guarantee a better study and accommodation environment. Your swift response would be much appreciated.
Yours faithfully,
Daisy Johnson
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... much appreciated. Yours faithfully, Daisy Johnson
^^^
Line 12, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d. Yours faithfully, Daisy Johnson
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99390243902 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02549030938 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682926829268 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8980637386 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16163610708 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688424752189 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612064873474 0.0603063233224 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120846432226 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0695241509603 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.