You recently attended a meeting at a hotel When you returned home you found you had left some important papers at the hotel Write a letter to the manager of the hotel 1 Say where you think you left the papers 2 Explain why they are so important 3 Tell the

Essay topics:

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.
1- Say where you think you left the papers.
2- Explain why they are so important
3- Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.

Dear Sir,
I am writing this to seek a help from you. Today afternoon, my company Infotech organised a meeting in your hotel conference room. Indeed, I am also a member in that and there, I forgot my new company project file on a table during my lunch. Actually, while having food I was talking to my Manager who made me lead of the project.
However, the file includes the papers of new designs of the project which are very important as a blueprint for the further implementation. Those are the only copies we have prepared, and I was so worried as I left them there because my hurry. At the same time, I was busy to look after the facilities for our company head to not to have any inconvenience for them.
Besides, I am from other city and came to your place to attend the meeting and client of the project. Hence, I request you to save the papers and courier to my address as early as possible. And my address is 9th Ave Midland, Toronto. It would be appreciated if you can do this help.
I look forward to hearing from you soon. Thanking you in advance.
Yours sincerely,
Abc.

Votes
Average: 6.4 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this to seek a help from yo...
^^^
Line 2, column 44, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this afternoon' is used.
Suggestion: This afternoon
...m writing this to seek a help from you. Today afternoon, my company Infotech organised a meetin...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nking you in advance. Yours sincerely, Abc.
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, hence, however, if, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38916256158 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51247946918 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625615763547 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9114557358 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.6428571429 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223365842315 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810957954601 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0758967139784 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149275377857 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698228331013 0.0580467560999 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.59 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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