You recently bought a camera while travelling overseas. When you got to your destination you discovered that some important items were missing from the box.
Write a letter to the local representative of the company. In your letter
give details of the camera and where you bought it
explain what has happened
say what you want him/her to do about it
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing in regard of my missing camera. It did not come in the box I send to the resort through your logistic company. The box was sent on May 1st and supposed to deliver to the hotel on May 3th, but it arrived with delay two days later.
Talking about details, it is a brand new camera by Panasonic and costs me 500 dollars. It is a black device with a large screen and a set of professional lenses. On top of that, there were a charger and a spare battery in a separate package. I think that it was stolen on the train while I was traveling from the airport to the resort, because it still had a unbroken seal on it. However, as soon as it arrived at the reception, I was suspicious that somebody at the railway station had opened it, since the seal was torn off.
To be frank, I am really disappointed, as I wanted to take of a picture, while going sightseeing. Now I am at a loss as to how to do without my camera. I insist that you find it in hot pursuit as soon as possible or refund my loss.
Yours faithfully,
Tolegen
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ort to the resort, because it still had a unbroken seal on it. However, as soon a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, may, really, so, still, while, as to, i think, talking about, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.15533980583 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48592986616 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611650485437 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7473493414 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.3333333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 4.34317383033 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147243822994 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509986345815 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367169796554 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0863813219826 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261591481018 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.55 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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