You recently bought a piece of equipment for you kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken.
Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter:
describe the problem with the equipment.
explain what happened when you phoned the shop.
say what you would like the manager to do.
Dear Sir,
I’m writing to you in order to inform you about dissatisfaction with stove that I purchased in your internet-store five days ago.
On the last week I ordered “LG gas stove” on your web-site, paid using my credit card and, as I said, it was delivered to me by your staff. The have been settled it for 2 hours and finally, when it was done I noticed the gas pressure from a burner is very low. Your specialists ensured me that the matter was in the whole gas system of my house and left.
Sorry to say, the pressure is still low and I spoke to my neighbors, they don’t have such problem with their stove. I called a number that wrote on your web-site. Operator told me to wait a call back, but there was no call.
I want to ask you to resolve this situation by changing the model of the stove within 5 working days. But this time make sure that stove is totally workable.
Thank you in advance for considering my problem.
Kind Regards
Max Eastwood
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 230, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ait a call back, but there was no call. I want to ask you to resolve this situat...
^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'so', 'still']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.233644859813 0.220444632235 106% => OK
Verbs: 0.168224299065 0.167888034529 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0467289719626 0.0606518309736 77% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0280373831776 0.0506257000042 55% => OK
Pronouns: 0.135514018692 0.118615021944 114% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102803738318 0.107062808482 96% => OK
Participles: 0.0373831775701 0.041066498444 91% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51028556766 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0373831775701 0.0385302599488 97% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0654205607477 0.0714148451538 92% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0191574576366 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00934579439252 0.00930345855455 100% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 995.0 1141.60824742 87% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.134020619 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46703296703 5.53046319177 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78085437643 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.236263736264 0.284621296913 83% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.181318681319 0.211203875043 86% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.120879120879 0.133321485273 91% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0714285714286 0.0843313296314 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51028556766 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653846153846 0.622163163488 105% => OK
Word variations: 66.3071022524 62.8969750728 105% => OK
How many sentences: 11.0 12.9587628866 85% => OK
Sentence length: 16.5454545455 16.4300151701 101% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5024231496 44.7399317507 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4545454545 90.9928171075 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.4300151701 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.363636363636 0.613754768223 59% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 34.6773226773 37.5504026743 92% => OK
Elegance: 1.12676056338 1.13073093955 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327634921924 0.331212695627 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0750603089963 0.0927372745006 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0695888288885 0.0736520305886 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.659354185032 0.579516596996 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.209675062225 0.180689518051 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12276257101 0.122183219658 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796429212461 0.0765303033291 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.153469978512 0.211926503985 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0948922059887 0.0737400523855 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186511889372 0.203819188451 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349418575029 0.067151250289 52% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.45360824742 80% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.48453608247 337% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.0206185567 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 4.73195876289 106% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 1.03092783505 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.56701030928 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 7.0 8.32989690722 84% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
---------------------
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.