Dear Selin and Denis,
I arrived home safely after I had had a long, fantastic journey. Thank you for ten days accommodation in your lovely house.
I was mersmerised by your house which was constructed a hundred years ago but still looks very elegant and affluent. Moreover, consuming traditional Australian foods which were tasty and exotic were an unforgettable experience for me. A short trip to Disney was also marvelous that many historical museums and art galaries were visited. Further and more importantly, scuba diving in Pasific Ocean was noteworthy since there were innumerable sea creatures which I found very interesting. I saw countless breathtaking views there which I enjoyed a lot.
Please come Istanbul and stay with me this summer. My parents will be traveling Europe so that our lovely detached house will be available to have fun. It is known that the best time to travel here is summer, and thus I hope you will be able to arrange it.
Thank you once again for amazing vacation.
Best wishes,
Mary
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, still, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 26.3917525773 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 863.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01744186047 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71443146585 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.726744186047 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1719466192 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.9166666667 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137910963547 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518543612581 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733591627263 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803129874321 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663181029292 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.