You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say:– Describe what you left and where it happened.– Why are these papers important?– What would you like the manager to do about it?

Essay topics:

You recently used a taxi and left some important documents there. Write a letter to the taxi manager and say:

– Describe what you left and where it happened.
– Why are these papers important?
– What would you like the manager to do about it?

Dear Manager,

I am writing this email in reference to a lost document file which I forgot in a taxi from your company. I clearly remember it was Thursday afternoon last week when I booked a cab after my interview from ABC towers, Lajpat Nagar, new Delhi with a drop location to Sector 41, Noida. when I de-boarded the cab, I unfortunately forgot my black colour document file inside the cab but I realized it later next morning when I was getting ready for my another interview.

On checking the cab number from the application I used to book the cab it was DL1234K5 and the driver name was Shakeel. Furthermore, when I tried getting the driver's personal mobile number it was not available on the application. Therefore, I thought of writing to you on this matter if you could help me in contacting the driver and searching that document file as it is extremely important to me it consists all my certificates, degrees and other important document. Also I am actively looking for new job which is why I need that file as soon as possible because a number of interviews are scheduled for next week. And it would not be possible for me to give any interview without having the file.

Kindly let me know at 1234567890 when you get any information regarding the lost file, and please do not hesitate to call me should you have any questions. I can come to your office and any other location where ever driver feels comfortable handing it to me.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Your faithfully
Monika Goswami

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...th a drop location to Sector 41, Noida. when I de-boarded the cab, I unfortunately f...
^^^^
Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
..., degrees and other important document. Also I am actively looking for new job which...
^^^^
Line 7, column 260, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ver feels comfortable handing it to me. I look forward to hearing from you. Y...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, regarding, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 937.175257732 134% => OK
No of words: 271.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63837638376 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67202499922 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 127.690721649 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575645756458 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 395.1 290.88556701 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.4961351358 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.75 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.83333333333 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12984432522 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048611130981 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593537570499 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894675436038 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305610882858 0.0580467560999 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.