You recently visited a theatre and had an accident there. The staff were very helpful. Write a letter to the manager giving good feedback.
In your letter, you should tell:
– and describe the accident
– how the staff helped you
– how similar situations could be prevented in the future.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to appreciate the members of your cinema staff for their timely and quick assistance at the time of misfortune happened with me in a cinema hall.
I am Ell Green and I went to watch a movie with my friends last week at Omaxe Multiplex. We were about ten minutes late due to road congestion and the movie had already started when we reached. The guard present there guided us but it was dark inside to see anything. Since one of the steps was broken, I tripped and fell sideways. As a result, I sprained my ankle.
At the same time, the crew on duty was very kind who provided me first-aid to alleviate the pain to some extent. Later, I have decided to leave and consult the doctor. I would like to thank the complete team who has arranged the wheelchair and assisted me to smoothly exit the building.
On this regard to uncertainty, I would suggest you get the steps repaired so that such incidents can be avoided in the near future. Meanwhile, please advise the guards to guide the audience to their seat and sign of caution at hall entry would also prove to be useful.
Once again, I sincerely thanks the staff for their generosity and cooperation.
Yours faithfully,
Ell Green
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 25, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'thank'
Suggestion: thank
...o be useful. Once again, I sincerely thanks the staff for their generosity and coop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57589285714 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43966985445 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665178571429 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.937825895 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8461538462 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2307692308 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07692307692 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0823869027597 0.216113520407 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0225564961424 0.0766984524023 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286590224505 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0432423435421 0.12726935374 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0296246624131 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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