You rented a car from car rental company, the air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it has still not been repaired.- Introduce yourself- Explain the situation- Say what action you would like the company to take

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the car I rented from your company before one week.

My name is John Methew and I rented a Vegenar with number ABC0234 on the Twenty-Fifth of April. Unfortunately, the air conditioner stopped working as I reached the home.

While, I was driving to my house, suddenly I heard a sound from the bonnet. I thought some problem occurred with the engine and I would not be able to reach the house. After some time, I felt hot and realized that issue is with air conditioner.

Naturally, after get back to home, I contacted your help-line number and registered a complaint. He gave me complaint number 23423 and informed that he will get the car repaired within 2 working days. One week had been passed but, the car is not been fixed yet. I am very much upset by your service.

In this regard, I want this car to be repaired within two working days, otherwise, I insist on a full refund of payment I made in advance of amount $150.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
John Methew.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216589861751 0.220444632235 98% => OK
Verbs: 0.198156682028 0.167888034529 118% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0276497695853 0.0606518309736 46% => Some adjectives wanted.
Adverbs: 0.0506912442396 0.0506257000042 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.110599078341 0.118615021944 93% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110599078341 0.107062808482 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0552995391705 0.041066498444 135% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64305591764 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0276497695853 0.0385302599488 72% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0829493087558 0.0714148451538 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00921658986175 0.0191574576366 48% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00930345855455 0% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1083.0 1141.60824742 95% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.134020619 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.61139896373 5.53046319177 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78085437643 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.316062176166 0.284621296913 111% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.217616580311 0.211203875043 103% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.108808290155 0.133321485273 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0725388601036 0.0843313296314 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64305591764 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626943005181 0.622163163488 101% => OK
Word variations: 61.9128317867 62.8969750728 98% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 12.9587628866 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.8461538462 16.4300151701 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.4562152482 44.7399317507 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3076923077 90.9928171075 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.4300151701 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.384615384615 0.613754768223 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 36.6078118772 37.5504026743 97% => OK
Elegance: 1.0641025641 1.13073093955 94% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333520870975 0.331212695627 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0783970957771 0.0927372745006 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0641673498302 0.0736520305886 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.639309286989 0.579516596996 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.237226255387 0.180689518051 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115103725877 0.122183219658 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891189831442 0.0765303033291 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.132671195918 0.211926503985 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0714408144588 0.0737400523855 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169936831127 0.203819188451 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583453208876 0.067151250289 87% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.45360824742 40% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.48453608247 404% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.0206185567 99% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 4.73195876289 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 1.03092783505 485% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.56701030928 117% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 8.32989690722 120% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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