You rented a car from car rental company, the air conditioner has stopped working. You phoned the company a week ago but it has still not been repaired.- Introduce yourself- Explain the situation- Say what action you would like the company to take

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction with the car I rented from your company before one week.

My name is John Methew and I rented a Vegenar with number ABC0234 on the Twenty-Fifth of April. Unfortunately, the air conditioner stopped working as I reached the home.

While, I was driving to my house, suddenly I heard a deafening sound from the bonnet. I thought some serious problem occurred with the engine and I would not be able to reach the house. After some time, I felt extremely hot and realized that the issue is with the cooling system.

Naturally, after get back to home, I contacted your help-line number and registered a complaint. He gave me complaint number 23423 and informed that he will get the car repaired within 2 working days. One week had been passed but, the air conditioner is not been fixed yet. I am very much upset by your poor service.

In this regard, I want this car to be repaired within two working days, otherwise, I insist on a full refund of payment I made in advance of amount $150.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully
John Methew.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'while']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.214285714286 0.220444632235 97% => OK
Verbs: 0.196428571429 0.167888034529 117% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0357142857143 0.0606518309736 59% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0535714285714 0.0506257000042 106% => OK
Pronouns: 0.107142857143 0.118615021944 90% => OK
Prepositions: 0.107142857143 0.107062808482 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0580357142857 0.041066498444 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.64104146124 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0267857142857 0.0385302599488 70% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0892857142857 0.0714148451538 125% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00892857142857 0.0191574576366 47% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00930345855455 0% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1135.0 1141.60824742 99% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.134020619 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.675 5.53046319177 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78085437643 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.33 0.284621296913 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.235 0.211203875043 111% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.115 0.133321485273 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.08 0.0843313296314 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64104146124 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63 0.622163163488 101% => OK
Word variations: 63.3698499699 62.8969750728 101% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 12.9587628866 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.3846153846 16.4300151701 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.7114452147 44.7399317507 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3076923077 90.9928171075 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 16.4300151701 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.384615384615 0.613754768223 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.09278350515 0% => OK
Readability: 38.8846153846 37.5504026743 104% => OK
Elegance: 1.0625 1.13073093955 94% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347045583535 0.331212695627 105% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0755531993175 0.0927372745006 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0709131508327 0.0736520305886 96% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.65305622923 0.579516596996 113% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.23150031942 0.180689518051 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120897730648 0.122183219658 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851317445204 0.0765303033291 111% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.137863207593 0.211926503985 65% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0809816121381 0.0737400523855 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175124513438 0.203819188451 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604277854491 0.067151250289 90% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.45360824742 40% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.48453608247 472% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.0206185567 75% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 4.73195876289 42% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 1.03092783505 485% => Less negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.56701030928 78% => OK
Total topic words: 9.0 8.32989690722 108% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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