You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter:
• Explain why you're interested in the tour.
• Ask for information about dates and prices.
• Express your concerns about your fitness level.
Dear sir,
I am delighted to become an active participant in the tour organised by your company. However, I am quite concern about my fitness related to walking in the mountains.
The main reason behind my interest to join the tour is that I want to view the beauty of nature from the closer aspect instead of photographs. Moreover, I am a botany student, so for my thesis I require in depth study of inhabitant of plants grown on mountains. Furthermore, send me details regarding the dates of starting and finishing the tour along with the packages and any other special arrangements available for your customers.
I want to specify you beforehand about my health concerns so that we both do not face any discomfort later on. I have low haemoglobin level so need more oxygen supply while climbing rocks as well need sufficient periods of rest. I take injection of insulin daily and carry medical prescription with me.
I hope this personal information about my health concerns clarify you everything before tour. If you have any concerns call me at my cell phone.
Thanking you
Yours sincerely,
abc
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 230, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s well need sufficient periods of rest. I take injection of insulin daily and car...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...carry medical prescription with me. I hope this personal information about my...
^
Line 9, column 95, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rns clarify you everything before tour. If you have any concerns call me at my cel...
^^
Line 14, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thanking you Yours sincerely, abc
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 934.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9417989418 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76691754547 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68253968254 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2529881213 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9090909091 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1818181818 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177366542935 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0717657967994 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516961767547 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0935643359062 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350847798344 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.