You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area In that letter explaining the problems suggesting ways to help the situation proposing a p

Essay topics:

You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems.
Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter
• explaining the problems
• suggesting ways to help the situation
• proposing a possible meeting

Dear Neighbours,

Merry Christmas to you and your family.

I am writing to bring to your note about rapidly growing parking issues in and around my house main-gate. Due to the fact, it is not only causing inconvenience to me but also to other neighbourhood people.

Indeed, it is a Christmas season and we tend to invite many friends and families but it will be very helpful, if they are advised to park their car in visitors parking area instead of using reserved parking slot. Consequently, owner of that reserved parking face difficulty to find another space to park their vehicle. Therefore, I suggest to give a piece of advice to your visitors to park the car at visitors area. As a result, it will ease the problem that we face during seasonal time. Besides, as a part of Christmas celebration, our family have planned for barbecue party at our backyard on coming weekend. Thus, you are welcome to join the party and also we shall utilize it to discuss about the parking issue.

I look forward to hearing your confirmation to join the party and discussion to make necessary arrangement in advance

Yours sincerely,
Sayu

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, if, look, so, therefore, thus, as to, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84183673469 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68742947371 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622448979592 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0319872102 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 4.34317383033 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169311384409 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603716306947 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04415179825 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0678754672291 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706496117615 0.0580467560999 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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