You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel.
Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter
tell them when you will be arriving and leaving
explain what type of rooms you would like, and ask how much the weekend will cost
ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir Or Madam,
I am writing to you in order to book reservation at your hotel for my family and I. We are planning to spend weekend over there.My family consists of 3 members, including my parents and myself,. We are going to arrive at your place on Friday evening approximately 8 o' clock and by Sunday evening, we will checkout as We have flight around 10 P.M. I am in need for 2 rooms in which 1 single bed and 1 double bed is required. It would be great if you can arrange both the room with beautiful lake view. I had a couple of more questions, I heard that your hotel does provide tour of the city, I am very much interested to participate in this tour so that I can explore more about the nearby places. Lastly, I would appreciate if you can send out brochure of total costing of each room so we can plan ahead and make the necessary payments to book the room.Looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours faithfully,
Jacob S.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: My
...re planning to spend weekend over there.My family consists of 3 members, including...
^^
Line 3, column 193, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...members, including my parents and myself,. We are going to arrive at your place o...
^^
Line 3, column 348, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...heckout as We have flight around 10 P.M. I am in need for 2 rooms in which 1 sing...
^^
Line 3, column 855, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Looking
...the necessary payments to book the room.Looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours ...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 896, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Yours
...ooking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours faithfully, Jacob S.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27932960894 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55135450666 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68156424581 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.2553852508 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 76.5299724578 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.8333333333 16.8248392259 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259000603209 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.124286542014 0.0766984524023 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539058941101 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.261679591778 0.12726935374 206% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.14 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.