You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
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During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants.
Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter
• Remind him when and where you met
• Tell him what kind of job you are interested in
• Say why you think you would be suitable for the job.
Dear Mr. Singh,
How are you doing? Hope you still remember me. We met during our plane journey from Delhi to Mumbai on Dec 24th and I was sitting next to you. I am writing this letter to express my interest for the job position you shared with me, in one of your restaurants in Mumbai.
As you are already aware that I am not very much satisfied with my role in my current organization, primarily because I am not getting any challenging role and the financial incentives are also not up to the industry standard. So, I am looking for a better career prospect and professional growth now. I am open to relocate as well for my career growth. As you told me during our journey that the job satisfaction index in your company is very high due to good exposure and incentives, I would like to apply for the job position of Sr. Manager in your company.
I possess a Masters’ Degree in hotel management from XLRI, Jamshedpur and have 6 years of relevant experience in hotel management. So, if you have any suitable job vacancy in any of your esteemed chain of restaurants, please consider me for the same.
I will be highly obliged.
Best regards,
Tejinder
Mobile no. - 9876100200
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 986.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62910798122 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71504576225 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.9343933845 44.8134815571 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1666666667 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187248026393 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639270479884 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634410083721 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847664490633 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894633754879 0.0580467560999 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.