You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.
In the letter:
explain why you were at the restaurant
describe the problems
write about the action you want the manager to take
You do NOT need to write your own address.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to complain about the performance of employees in your restaurant.
It was about a week ago that my friends have dinned in your restaurant and they suggested me to hold my husband's surprised birthday party there. After that, I visited there and its traditional decoration allure me and finally I contracted for a surprised party with twelve guests.
unfortunately, The day of party when I arrive to restaurant I shocked because your staff didn't prepare a decorated desk for birthday and my guests who had come before me were waiting standing. In addition, the menu was not extensive at all. There are only some kind of Kebab and it didn't have any food without meat for my vegetarian friends. So three of my guests ate only bread and salad and I was shunned. Finally I was reluctant to pay and I did press this point with your staff but they threatened me by calling to police and at end I complied with paying.
Now, I request a full refund of the amount paid. By considering in mind the circumstance I trust you will kindly pay it off to me. In addition, I expect you to memorize your employees to be more attentive and heedful otherwise you customers will take their parties to elsewhere.
I am waiting for your response.
your faithfully,
Sahar
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to complain abo...
^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Unfortunately
...a surprised party with twelve guests. unfortunately, The day of party when I arrive to rest...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 90, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...restaurant I shocked because your staff didnt prepare a decorated desk for birthday a...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 262, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'kinds'?
Suggestion: kinds
...t extensive at all. There are only some kind of Kebab and it didnt have any food wit...
^^^^
Line 4, column 283, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...here are only some kind of Kebab and it didnt have any food without meat for my veget...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 409, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...only bread and salad and I was shunned. Finally I was reluctant to pay and I did press ...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
...e. I am waiting for your response. your faithfully, Sahar
^^^^
Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g for your response. your faithfully, Sahar
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, so, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65800865801 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69725805022 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601731601732 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3515554635 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7692307692 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187135822177 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570124779113 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494673812203 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10267236819 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548900256571 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to complain abo...
^^^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Unfortunately
...a surprised party with twelve guests. unfortunately, The day of party when I arrive to rest...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 90, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...restaurant I shocked because your staff didnt prepare a decorated desk for birthday a...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 262, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'kinds'?
Suggestion: kinds
...t extensive at all. There are only some kind of Kebab and it didnt have any food wit...
^^^^
Line 4, column 283, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...here are only some kind of Kebab and it didnt have any food without meat for my veget...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 409, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...only bread and salad and I was shunned. Finally I was reluctant to pay and I did press ...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
...e. I am waiting for your response. your faithfully, Sahar
^^^^
Line 8, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g for your response. your faithfully, Sahar
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, so, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1076.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65800865801 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69725805022 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601731601732 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3515554635 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7692307692 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.92307692308 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187135822177 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570124779113 0.0766984524023 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494673812203 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10267236819 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548900256571 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.