You want to study a course in a local college. You already wrote a letter about the same to the principal of the college but you have not yet received any reply to your letter.
Write a letter to the principal. In your letter
• Details of the course
• Why you want to study in that college only
• Request him/her to give an early reply.
Dear Sir,
My name is Abhishek Tyagi and I have enrolled in the “Software Programming” course in your college which is due to start next week from the 15th December 2020. This course involves learning of various programming languages and working on various live projects. However, I am writing this letter to get the details of requirements that I need to bring while attending this course.
You would be surprised to know it was my dream to study from your college as my elder brother did the same course and got a decent job in a multinational company. He is the one who inspired me to study and enroll in the same course. Moreover, your college has introduced a placement policy this year which will help me to apply jobs in various reputed companies which are going to hire students from your college.
Now, could I request you to please send me the requirements to carry while attending classes along with the enlisted companies which are going to visit the college to hire students.
I look forward to a prompt reply on this as the commencement date of classes is approaching.
Yours faithfully,
Abhishek Tyagi
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89743589744 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72410526722 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.594871794872 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.0688230857 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.111111111 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 16.8248392259 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.77777777778 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23378662139 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817499941584 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459349917539 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109877337177 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598197885648 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.