You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation.
Write a letter to the agency to get information about accommodation.
In your letter, say:
why you are going to this country
what kind of accommodation you want
when you will arrive
Dear Sir,
I am writing to inquire about accommodation near the London University. I would be grateful to you to book a budget accommodation to choose from here before my arrival on April 23rd.
I recently got an admission for Master of Science in London University, a top business school in Hammersmith, London. Although, this course runs for a year, the institution apologized for no vacancy in the college hostel. Therefore, I would like to make my stay comfortable on my visit April 23rd through your agency to avoid any last minute surprises. I prefer a budget accommodation at a walkable distance. So that I could not only save some money on travel expense but also keep me fit and healthy.
Besides, please email me the entire list of accommodation with the facilities of it along with some decent photograph. Also, please share agency service commission.
Thank you so much for your kind help.
I look forward to receiving the booklet soon.
Yours sincerely,
Yusa
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'budget accommodation'.
Suggestion: budget accommodation
...ity. I would be grateful to you to book a budget accommodation to choose from here before my arrival o...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ere before my arrival on April 23rd. I recently got an admission for Master of...
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Line 5, column 363, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'budget accommodation'.
Suggestion: budget accommodation
...oid any last minute surprises. I prefer a budget accommodation at a walkable distance. So that I could...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 829.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02424242424 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90089755275 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.715151515152 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5781612166 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.0833333333 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229720882876 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698943334258 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539619421273 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111575235025 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746413222511 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.