You work for a company You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work Write a letter to your manager In your letter give details of the course say how the course would be useful explain how the company cou

Essay topics:

You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work.

Write a letter to your manager. In your letter

give details of the course
say how the course would be useful
explain how the company could help you do this course.

Submitted by Tolik on Tue, 05/04/2021 - 06:28

Dear Mr Johnson,

I am writing to inform you about an upcoming course in Java programming language. I came across the course in the newspaper “Kazakhstan” issued in April. It takes place in Astana city on May 5th and lasts for 5 days.

I would like to attend it, because the project I am working on needs the object oriented approach in programming. In the course I will learn how to make my plan my workplace, make use of creating classes in Java and carry out quality tests. These new skills will help me deal with non-trivial issues while performing customer requirements. On top of that, I will get to know how to use the version of Java framework based on both classes and interfaces.

However, the training is fairly expensive. It costs approximately 500 dollars, but I will have to pay 300 dollars first, which I cannot afford now. Thus, I would like the company to compensate my expenses, since I am planning to do it for the sake of the company. On top of that I need to pay for accommodation in another city for a week. I am going to rent a room in a hotel, which will cost me another 300 dollars. In total it amounts to 800 dollars and 5 days off work.

I would appreciate it if you reply me as soon as possible, as the course starts in three days. I am looking forward to your answer.

Yours sincerely,
Tolegen

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Average: 8.1 (2 votes)
Essay Categories
IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, so, thus, while, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44129554656 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70728233341 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595141700405 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.024729391 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5625 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4375 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260935380507 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728133799503 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046050839367 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145170783919 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334418022743 0.0580467560999 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, so, thus, while, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44129554656 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70728233341 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595141700405 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 333.0 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.024729391 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5625 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4375 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260935380507 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728133799503 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046050839367 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145170783919 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334418022743 0.0580467560999 58% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.