Dear Sir,
I am a patron customer of yours and I am writing to inquire about the availability of an electric tandoor and a hand blender as I am very keen to buy them. In case, if they are not in stock at present in your store, will it be possible for you to order them for me?
I am residing in South Avenue which is close to your shop and as I have aforementioned that being a regular customer I have faith in you because you have always provided me the best service. Hence, I believe that this time also you will offer me the best deal. Therefore, I would like to know the prices of both the items, so that I can arrange the money before hand.
Though, I will try my level best to pay you at the earliest because even I am in absolute need of these things but if, I am not able to buy them immediately then up till when you will able to keep them on hold for me?
I am eagerly waiting for your prompt reply.
Yours sincerely,
John
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: BEFORE_HAND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beforehand'?
Suggestion: beforehand
... items, so that I can arrange the money before hand. Though, I will try my level best t...
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Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... will able to keep them on hold for me? I am eagerly waiting for your prompt rep...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, then, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 767.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.10160427807 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24768207154 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604278074866 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.0511165689 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.875 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 16.8248392259 139% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266359933845 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0994621439933 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870791771978 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14412645904 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0847593569801 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.8 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.55 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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