Dear Alex,
I hope this letter finds your loving family in good health. I am writing to see if I could ask a permission. Please let me to demonstrate my situation.
As you know, my husband and I are going to Melbourne on 1st October. Not only in order to travel but also become your housekeeper whilst you are in Europe. Unfortunately, my poor little dog, Puffy, had a recurrent sickness and need to be under the supervision. In addition, this circumstance will turn out to be way more expensive if we let Puffy stay in veterinary clinic. Thus, we decided to bring him travel with us.
I was hoping you wouldn't mind allowing Puffy, a really nice and well behaved dog, to stay together with us in your place. I will always keep an eye on her to make sure everything is going alright. Plus, your house will be kept tidy and clean perfectly all the time.
Thank you kindly,
Thanh Mai
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Alex, I hope this letter finds your loving fam...
^^^
Line 4, column 18, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...g him travel with us. I was hoping you wouldnt mind allowing Puffy, a really nice and ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, thus, well, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 726.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45398773006 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55541909198 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.705521472393 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 225.9 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.9831298385 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.5 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5833333333 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249782728849 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789528336727 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058216170939 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145807281241 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238881407486 0.0580467560999 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.