You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Ardalan Hajmehdi and I work at IT Company. Recently, I’ve received an invitation letter that is relevant to take part in a seminar in Paris, France. I’m quite glad to participate in this seminar and I highly think that it can be useful to me.
In general, I would like to take some detailed information about it. At first, I need to know about the date of seminar. To be honest, these days we are completely busy. To taking part, I should consider most of them and make a free time.
Secondly, I’m enthusiastic to know about its programmes. For example, detailed information about lecturers and topics of lecture. It’s important to all participator to search about them before going there.
Finally, I’m interested to know about kinds of accommodations and their costs. I firmly believe that hotel is the best choice to stay which will be located near the seminar location. Because all engineers can manage their times to get there.
In conclusion, I’m anxiously waiting to attend in this amazing seminar and I hope that everything will be perfect and beneficial.
I’m looking forward to hearing from you in the near future.
Sincerely yours,
Ardalan Hajmehdi
Comments
Dear Sir,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 189, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...l be located near the seminar location. Because all engineers can manage their times to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, look, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, in conclusion, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14778325123 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77033928989 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625615763547 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.7676704597 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.3125 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6875 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164713371005 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508272539133 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0475496206196 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795537847727 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034654204659 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.7 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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