You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am James Ryan, a senior manager at ABC Consulting Company in Dublin, Ireland. From a small team of only ten people in 2009, we have tripled in size and continuously expanded our services, targeting corporate strategy.
Having learned about your upcoming seminar on sustainable business strategy held in London next month, I believe this is a great opportunity to update practical knowledge in our targeted service line. Therefore, I would really appreciate it if you could give me some information so that I can make a well-prepared plan ahead of the seminar.
First, I would like to know the exact date and venue of the seminar, as both remain unconfirmed. Second, the advert only displayed a brief introduction of the seminar contents, so any further detail on the programme schedule and keynote speakers would be helpful. In addition, kindly advise me as to whether accommodation is arranged for the attendees, as some of my colleagues are also joining. Lastly, please inform me on the registration fee and other relevant expenses for attending the seminar.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
James
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 295, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
... helpful. In addition, kindly advise me as to whether accommodation is arranged for the atten...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, look, really, second, so, therefore, well, as to, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 979.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15263157895 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9207681227 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.731578947368 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4706845604 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.9 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 4.34317383033 198% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192641669939 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0656484299468 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551307749342 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929796915803 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0792780199137 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.