Dear Sir/Madam,
I am a doctor and I am writing to inquire about the work related seminar which is going to take place in Nepal next month as I am very keen to attend it with few of my colleagues.
I am currently associated with an extremely prestigious hospital in Delhi since four years but I now along with many other doctors is planning to move to Canada for the better growth of our careers. However, I think that we certainly lack some of the essential information required for the migration. Hence, I firmly that this seminar will be quite beneficial for all of us. Although, a lot of data was given in the news paper advertisement but still, I would like to gather some more knowledge of it. To be precise, I want to know the exact date and time along with the venue of this event. Also, could you please throw some light on the topics that will be covered in it.
In addition, it would be kind of you, if you could share the details of accommodation because in case, if it is not a part of this package then we will make arrangements beforehand so that our trip is comfortable. Lastly, let me know the price of this entire package and the mode of payment so that we can pay you swiftly to book our places in advance.
Waiting for your prompt reply.
Yours sincerely,
John
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 240, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...However, I think that we certainly lack some of the essential information required for the ...
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Line 5, column 417, Rule ID: NEWS_PAPER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'newspaper'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: newspaper
...lthough, a lot of data was given in the news paper advertisement but still, I would like t...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, lastly, so, still, then, i think, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1058.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40833333333 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50826411865 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620833333333 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0270832511 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1818181818 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.72727272727 4.34317383033 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144756615401 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478423110486 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357042964182 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771860058436 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0174647460246 0.0580467560999 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.3 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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