Your child is going away on a school trip for three days to another country. The head teacher wants some parents to join the trip and you would like to go.
Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:
• Say why you would like to go
• Suggest what you could do to help during the trip
• Ask some more questions about the trip
Your child is going away on a school trip for three days to another country. The head teacher wants some parents to join the trip and you would like to go.
Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:
• Say why you would like to go
• Suggest what you could do to help during the trip
• Ask some more questions about the trip
Dear Ms Robinson,
My son, Mark Thomson, has signed up for trip to Georgia last week and parent’s associations has requested me to join the group for this excursion with the students. I am writing this letter to a inform the school authorities and wanted to clarify few doubts about this trip.
I have volunteered to join the children for this tour, as I am a native of Batumi, a place on the itinerary where the kids are planning to visit. I am well-verse with the local culture and the tradition of the place and can assist the students and teacher to visit the local places in and around the city. Since the tour guides only speak in Kartuli, a local language in Georgia, I can liaise with them for arranging trips and sightseeing of old maritime district and Botanical gardens.
I wanted to seek clarification from you regarding a time off for children to go for shopping souvenirs in Georgia. In Tbilisi, every Thursday, there is a flea market organised on old Mascot street. The vendors sell their collections from Soviet Era and World War II times and local artisans play live music. This will help the students to understand the culture and also, learn about some history.
I look forward to meeting you at the briefing session for the trip.
Your sincerely,
Rehana thomson
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...tudents. I am writing to this letter to a inform the school authorities and wante...
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Line 5, column 202, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...tudents. I am writing to this letter to a inform the school authorities and wanted to cl...
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Line 9, column 158, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... kids are planning to visit in Georgia. I am well verse with the local culture an...
^
Line 13, column 309, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...mes and local artisans play live music. this will help the students to understand th...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1103.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79565217391 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57500344119 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617391304348 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.2302256492 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.272727273 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168986833775 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607879198916 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493221033393 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995093631164 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311624543542 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.