Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go.
Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:
Say why you would like to go on the trip
Suggest what you could do to help during the trip
Ask other questions about the trip
Dear Madam,
I am writing this letter to apply for the job which was advertised in newspaper.
I am a 22 year old female. I have had previous experience in playschool. As I am visiting Australia for second time for just six months, I was looking for a place to stay at along with a job and I found your offer up to the mark. I would love to opt for this job as it is related to my field of interest. Moreover, I need a source of income to earn my livelihood as well.
Since I have already mentioned that I was a playschool teacher. I have four years of experience in this field. I am also qualified with the diploma of child care. I would be suitable for the job because of my friendly behavior and I am well versed with kid’s diet as well. If you would like to run a background check I am totally fine by it as I come from a reputed family and have a clear history.
I usually spend my leisure by reading books. As you have a pre-schooler at your place I would love to read story books to her. I understand that this age is an age of learning and my actions would affect hers as well. I would try to kill time by playing fun games with academic value. Furthermore, I would teach her moral values as well so she build’s up her overall character.
My consideration for this job would be a kind gesture on your part.
Yours sincerely,
Sukhman
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 372, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...f income to earn my livelihood as well. Since I have already mentioned that I was a p...
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Line 4, column 163, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...alified with the diploma of child care. I would be suitable for the job because o...
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Line 5, column 45, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ally spend my leisure by reading books. As you have a pre-schooler at your place I...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1093.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 262.0 206.0 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.17175572519 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55159737151 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549618320611 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 344.7 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1767153957 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.7222222222 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5555555556 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.05555555556 4.34317383033 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135596141987 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0444900385113 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354103133611 0.0603063233224 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785169325658 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025555062362 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.31 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.92 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.