Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go.
Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:
Say why you would like to go on the trip
Suggest what you could do to help during the trip
Ask other questions about the trip
Dear Teacher,
I am writing this email in reference to the upcoming international trip of three days to Australia. I read about this trip from my son Arav's dairy. He is in 4th standard and teacher wrote a note about this trip in his dairy. In the note she also mentioned that school is in search of parents who are willing to join the student group for this trip.
I would be glad to help school here as I am free on those dates 21st September to 23rd September. As well as I have already been there and have a stamped visa, valid till next year. I am also a school teacher and have a good experience of handling students. Furthermore, as I have been there before so I can suggest as well plan better schedule with rules and processes for the group with your staff teachers. Just would like to know if already decided, about the kind of places that school would like to visit? Also, the place where the stay has been planned?. Want to know as I have few contacts there if I can help you with these planning.
If you find my profile suitable for the responsibility kindly let me know. Please do not hesitate to call me at 9643402034 should you have any questions.
Thank you!
Your sincerely
Monika Goswami
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 21, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ons. Thank you! Your sincerely Monika Goswami
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1015.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51111111111 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39474321415 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604444444444 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.996129228 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0714285714 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205318365911 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670251493125 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440442424794 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103606071898 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356604682018 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.