Your find that your study load is too heavy. Write a letter to your college teacher explaining why you need to withdraw from two courses. Ask if it is possible to obtain a refund.
• You should write at least 150 words.
• You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Mr. Ivanov
My name is Evgeny Ivashko (student ID 12785, law faculty) and I am writing to you to report the situation around my study curriculum. I would like to request a withdrawal from two courses: the financial system of the Russian Federation and the legal regulation of the financial market in Russian Federation.
There are several reasons for this. The main one is that my study is too difficult. This is because I already have twelve courses and these appeared only this year. Another reason is that these subjects are far from my current specialization which is the law regulations of blockchain technology in Russia. Recently I became aware of the opportunity to change the curriculum. If this happens, I will be very pleased because I will be able to concentrate only on my major subjects.
In addition, I would like to ask if this action goes with a refund option. If there is such a thing, please write to me about the exact sum and I will provide you with the details of my bank account. Please note that my bank also allows to make a transaction via Paypal.
I greatly appreciate your time and consideration. Should you have any questions, please do not hesitate to contact me. I look forward to hearing from you and thank you in advance for your help.
Yours sincerely,
Evgeny Ivashko
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'making'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: making
...t. Please note that my bank also allows to make a transaction via Paypal. I greatly ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74782608696 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70761720453 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7692071587 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.8 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.06666666667 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210416232177 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06608205518 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664106483169 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128669658094 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091529132824 0.0580467560999 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.