Your friend is coming to stay in your neighborhood. He has asked some information about the school.
- Describe the school
- Give your opinion
- Why his/her children would like it
Dear Tejpal,
Hope you are doing great. I am glad to hear that you are coming in my city to live in my vicinity, surely, we will have a lot fun. I am writing this letter to give you the required information about school in my area.
Good news is that I have found a renowned school names 'BSM Model', which is not only famous for its world class education standards, but also known for facilities and amenities being offered by this institution to students. Last year, 250 students cracked IIT and MBBS entrance exams from this school, which is a benchmark performance. As per my opinion, this school would be best option for your kids, as this school affiliated under CBSE board and considering your children already studying under CBSE board, so it won't me much hassle for them to switch school.
In addition to it, this school is only 4km far from the place, where you are going to stay. Therefore, there will be no so much commuting on daily basis for children. I am sure that your younger child Ajay would love this school because this school organize many sports events including table tennis, which is favorite sport of Ajay.
Hope, you would be happy with my choice. Looking forward to see you. Let me know if anything else required from my end.
Best Regards,
Manpreet
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 373, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
...e. As per my opinion, this school would be best option for your kids, as this school af...
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Line 9, column 58, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...e happy with my choice. Looking forward to see you. Let me know if anything else requi...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64628820961 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29549824208 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672489082969 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.3249129878 44.8134815571 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8461538462 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.61538461538 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20861150304 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607956122069 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0716373227431 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114419778144 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066031064935 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.