Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letterExplain the reasons for the noiseApologizeDescribe what action you will take

Essay topics:

Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter
Explain the reasons for the noise
Apologize
Describe what action you will take

Dear Sam,

I am writing this letter in response to the complaint raised about the disturbance that you are facing. You probably do not know that we recently started renovating our house, we are trying to change the interiors and base architecture. So there are some drilling in and around the place. This is the main reason of the noise
I do understand that you have elderly person at your home, I am extremely sorry for the inconvenience caused by the work. Although, we have permission from local authorities, still we are trying to find a best time to do the drilling and cleaning. As per the contractor, I have been assured that this will be completed in next 2 weeks.
To mitigate the issue, I have instructed workers to carry out all the noisy works between 10:00 AM to 2:00 PM to avoid the disturbance to other neighbors’. They assured that they will use the upgraded machinery to shun the sound to the possible extent.

Yours faithfully,
DVN

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 204, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...uthorities, still we are trying to find a best time to do the drilling and cleani...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72781065089 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79396479529 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.644970414201 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9696865276 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7777777778 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 4.34317383033 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217792124508 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083505789601 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795029843643 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109942156233 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517032520285 0.0580467560999 89% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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