Your neighbours have a dog that is noisy at night. You can’t sleep. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter:– describe the problem with the dog– explain why it is important for you to sleep– outline what your neighbours could do about th

Dear Mr. and Ms. Smith,

I am writing you to complain about your dog.

First of all, it has been barking all night without any break consequently it creates distress, and makes us depressed as well as unhappy.

Secondly, I cannot sleep properly after you moved flat which is next to ours. Sleeping is vitally important for me since I am a doctor who have three surgeries in average daily. I need to relax and recharge my battery when I am at my home to be able to work efficiently at the folowing day. Despite you have been living for a week here, there is an obvious drop in my performance due to this fatique.

Finally, it would be beneficial for your dog if you could move a house with garden where it can play games and have fun. If it is not possible, walking, also, at least an hour a day with it would make him calm down and relax. I hope this phenomenon will be resolved as soon as possible.

I await your resolution promptly.

Yours sincerely

Mary Brown

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, well, at least, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44198895028 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4234817808 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707182320442 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.8374822735 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.0909090909 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 4.34317383033 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295751029461 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106521268241 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872172799322 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139186321239 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118400711698 0.0580467560999 204% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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