Nowadays,some developed countries are spent on space exploration ,some king of research to know the new technology and whether condition .However some people thinks that exploration money would be benefit spent on the poverty ,huger,sport and game central .I am totally disagree with this argument that ,government should be spent the money for huger people which was needed .In the face of issue ,i would like to analyse the one point of views before logical sound and conclude.
firstly, 20 percent people are suffering from poverty, if government are exploration money collect and should provided the some of money .People are improve economic condition and prevent for death rate. For example ,in this time Africa was suffering from poverty so if government are look for the their problem ans help for them .In this ways Africa was supported .
Secondly, sport are the most import income for the our country .If exploration money was Admited to the sport central .sport are the training for the people and the go to good practice for the every days so one days sport are increased .for example in this time Nepal is increasing and winner for the sport .
Thirdly,people do not have a lot of money they choose the cut of tree and they buy and keep the money to use the daily basic need .Therefore deforestation rate are increasing .while government should provided facility to improve the economic condition .government are provide for rules and regulation for the cut the tree .
In concluded the troubles in the world today,if people are spent on space exploration they are research the global warming as well as if exploration money are used the other place ,starvation rate is decrease.
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'third', 'thirdly', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.323529411765 0.247107548796 131% => OK
Verbs: 0.169934640523 0.15552993741 109% => OK
Adjectives: 0.062091503268 0.0946569551029 66% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0196078431373 0.0437536398559 45% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124183006536 0.122223957237 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0424836601307 0.0403219363162 105% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.62427903095 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0196078431373 0.0326786765898 60% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.114379084967 0.0861751148067 133% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.016339869281 0.0214082191602 76% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00326797385621 0.0119246538136 27% => More subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, whom, Whose, That.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1704.0 1933.38276553 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 316.052104208 90% => OK
Chars per words: 5.93728222997 6.10592293882 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20519365927 98% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.321678321678 0.37474360046 86% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.251748251748 0.284197041944 89% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174825174825 0.203843217982 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118881118881 0.137313986986 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62427903095 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.527972027972 0.560935902166 94% => OK
Word variations: 52.8631306378 60.7401812628 87% => OK
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0911823647 37% => More sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 47.6666666667 20.7725350517 229% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 105.716602291 49.5273876611 213% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 35.0136986301 93.4120437189 37% => More chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 5.87671232877 15.2821509519 38% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.308219178082 0.594174754866 52% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.39078156313 114% => OK
Language errors: 44.0 5.01102204409 878% => Too many language errors. Double check essay format, grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 72.8414918415 49.1922392462 148% => OK
Elegance: 2.17391304348 1.69127372897 129% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.364482781951 0.332604825255 110% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.257823705082 0.102734651613 251% => Sentence is so close to another sentence.
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0485767426285 0.0668474354756 73% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.906111333558 0.534917948617 169% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.132778625435 0.148666948902 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.22197811701 0.13441755203 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113039967727 0.0742828286743 152% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.349019990813 0.324241079732 108% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0574086082962 0.0640056729886 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25416126835 0.22793763319 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0956504906259 0.0582452615562 164% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.68436873747 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41883767535 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.88977955912 34% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.60220440882 154% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.00200400802 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 6.0 10.493987976 57% => OK
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Rates: 55.4505494505 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 5.0 Out of 9
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