Crimes and other kinds of information on TV and newspapers have bad consequences This kind of information should be restricted to be shown in media To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement

It is inevitable fact that in the future, the uses of electronic gadgets are irreplaceble. In the ancient time, individuals did their work by visiting that place. But, the online system and electronic gadgets replaced that work and people started doing work from home. In this essay, I will explicate both the merits and demerits.

To commence with, Doing work on internet and on smart phones are useful for both the employees and employers. Recently, In the corona pandemic, most of the companies gave the work to their employees to do at home which was extremely beneficial for both of them. In others words, companies saved alot of expenses which they spend on giving the office environment to the employees. For example, in the recent survey, it showed that management did not give any office floor facility to the employees and also save transportation expenditure.

In allied to this, if a person go to the working place then it wastes his time on transport. But beacuse of incremented in the internet, people are saving time and also spend their time with their family which give them more confident and give more energy to do their work properly. Spending time with relatives is beneficial for all the human being that's why the employees do the productive work. For instance, University of Delhi researched and conducted that people who are doing work from home and spend time with their family are more productive in their work than the people who are doing work at their working place.

On the opposite side, despite work from home is beneficial but also have some cons. With the increased gadgets, individuals are facing some health problems. They spend most of the time on computer, laptops and mobile phones which effcts the eyesight and also give some personal health problems. Due to which the intensity of people are doing work down which will not beneficial for the growth of the company in the future.

In compendium, after pondering a great deal of thoughts and deliberation, I come to conclusion that, work at working place and work from home have their own benefits. But in the ongoing era, technology repalces the person due to which people started to do their work from home with the help of electronic gadgets.

Votes
Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, for example, for instance

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1866.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89763779528 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53948367634 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.45406824147 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6842050181 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0645807726591 0.244688304435 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279921347316 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0235846251747 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0404620023747 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132922406659 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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