Despite health warnings, a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world. Why should we be concerned about this? What solution would you suggest?
Cigarette smoking is one of the major concerns in most of the countries. Despite knowing the consequences, people are still addicted to this habit.
Every year million of dollars is spent on medical expenditure to cure diseases occurred due to cigarette smoking. The government spends a large portion of money on the advertisements to stop people from smoking cigarette. This money could be better used on food and other important activities. Smoking not only affects the active smokers, but also the passive smokers. It is said that passive smokers get more affected by the cigarette smoke. Every ...
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 17 15
No. of Words: 265 350
No. of Characters: 1305 1500
No. of Different Words: 148 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.035 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.925 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.686 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 100 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 75 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 27 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.588 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.562 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.471 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.292 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.486 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.061 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5