More and more people these days work harder and longer hours and have no time for family life and friends. What are the causes in your opinion? How is it affecting family life and the society as a whole? Use relevant examples to support your view

Essay topics: More and more people these days work harder and longer hours and have no time for family life and friends. What are the causes in your opinion? How is it affecting family life and the society as a whole? Use relevant examples to support your view

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Lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over couple of decades. Presently, people are in the rat race of achieving more and more in every field. Hence, they are lack of quality time to spend with kith and kins. Here, I would like to account for causes and effects behind this phenomenon.

There are manifold causes behind it. First and foremost, people are passionate for living aristocratic lifestyle. Therefore, they have to work round the clock in order to earn money to fulfill their wishes such as buying ravishing homes, cars and electronic apparatus. Apart from it, people, being show off, want to earn name and fame by accomplishing massive success. As a result, they are being subjected t ...

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Sentence: Initially, less quality time for family and society members is not only disintegrating to communty sense but also damaging harmony among relationships with family.
Error: communty Suggestion: community

Sentence: Further emphasizng on my point of view, new generation is less obidient, sincere, respectful and cooperative because of this trend.
Error: obidient Suggestion: obedient
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Sentence: For instance, parents have no suffient time to install social etiquettes, moral and cultural values on account of busy schedules.
Error: suffient Suggestion: No alternate word

Sentence: Consequently, noble characters in a society will not be in existentence which is a major concern.
Error: existentence Suggestion: No alternate word

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Score: 8.0 out of 9
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
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No. of Sentences: 21 15
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Sentence Length SD: 5.206 7.5
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