Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teacher

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Recent figures show an increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18. Some psychologists claim that the basic reason for this is that children these days are not getting the social and emotional learning they need from parents and teachers.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Crime rate has rapidly increased from the past decade. There is a apparent increase in crime among youngsters. It is agreed that there is a steady increase in violent crime among youngsters under the age of 18.This will be proven by analyzing how youngsters are influenced by crime around them.

Parents and teachers play a important role in everyone's life. As an example, if a child has done something wrong it's the parent or teachers responsibility to teach him what is right and what is wrong because children look up to their parents or teachers opinion. If the parents give wrong guidance then it leads to bad behavior of children. Based on this example we can say that parents may be a reason for violent crime in youngsters.

Money also a important assert in one's life. Lack of basic needs also lead the youngsters to go in the wrong direction. For example, if a youngster needs something that his parents cannot afford then he will choose a alternative way to get what he needs. After analyzing this, Violent crime increases among youngsters due to financial problems in the family.

Following the analysis, it is known that parents/teachers as well as financial problem lead to increase in violent crime in youngsters. Youngsters under some circumstances tend to violent crime. It is expected that violent crime in youngsters will be increased more significantly in the coming years.

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There is a apparent increase
There is an apparent increase

play a important role
play an important role

Money also a important assert in one's life.
Money also is an important assert in one's life.

Youngsters under some circumstances tend to violent crime
Youngsters under some circumstances tend to commit crimes

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