Some people believe that crime rate can be reduced by giving a long punishment, while others say there are alternate ways to reduce crime. Discuss both ways and give your opinion.
Nowadays, crime is on its alarming rate in every corner of world like a street and this is one of world biggest problem. It is argued that imprisonment for long time can be more effective to reduce crimes. on the other hand some people believe that other methods rather than long punishment is worth beneficial for criminals. Here, i would like to an account for both views with my own perception.
There are manifold point to explain former view. First and foremost, long term imprisonment allows criminal to fe...
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...s worth beneficial for criminals. Here, i would like to an account for both views...
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...for both views with my own perception. There are manifold point to explain form...
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...panacea to pause crime at major level. Numerous points to explain latter view. ...
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...b boost their confidence and helps them leading a crime free life. From ...
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... helps them leading a crime free life. From my notion, both aspects have their ...
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...but i still think that education should be best alternative to imprisonment by many spe...
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... imprisonment by many specific reason. To recapitulate, imprisonment can be eff...
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...d leading problem but education work as a effective base to develop good characte...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'consequently', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'thus', 'well', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'what is more', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252631578947 0.247107548796 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.155263157895 0.15552993741 100% => OK
Adjectives: 0.121052631579 0.0946569551029 128% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0473684210526 0.0501201869031 95% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0421052631579 0.0437536398559 96% => OK
Prepositions: 0.110526315789 0.122223957237 90% => OK
Participles: 0.0421052631579 0.0403219363162 104% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.69366181127 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.05 0.0326786765898 153% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0552631578947 0.0861751148067 64% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0289473684211 0.0214082191602 135% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00789473684211 0.0119246538136 66% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2214.0 1933.38276553 115% => OK
No of words: 344.0 316.052104208 109% => OK
Chars per words: 6.43604651163 6.10592293882 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20519365927 102% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.357558139535 0.37474360046 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255813953488 0.284197041944 90% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.177325581395 0.203843217982 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.133720930233 0.137313986986 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69366181127 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593023255814 0.560935902166 106% => OK
Word variations: 68.1641345475 60.7401812628 112% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0911823647 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.2 20.7725350517 83% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3001305481 49.5273876611 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.7 93.4120437189 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2 15.2821509519 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.594174754866 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.39078156313 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01102204409 239% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 42.7813953488 49.1922392462 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.65591397849 1.69127372897 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278266976366 0.332604825255 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0746600968338 0.102734651613 73% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0785228486222 0.0668474354756 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.460540954571 0.534917948617 86% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.166666869202 0.148666948902 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923478648912 0.13441755203 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519734726285 0.0742828286743 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.24598956564 0.324241079732 76% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0699354409118 0.0640056729886 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181168904545 0.22793763319 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278122849783 0.0582452615562 48% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41883767535 58% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.88977955912 136% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.60220440882 192% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.00200400802 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 13.0 10.493987976 124% => OK
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Rates: 81.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.5 Out of 9