Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, the vast improvement of airport infrastructures and the ease of air travel have resulted to the increasing number of people travelling. As such, there has been an exposure of people to varying cultures and behaviors of both the travelers and the people of the host country, and it seems that this trend resulted to arguments whether foreigners should adhere to the customs and behavior of the inhabitants, or that cultural differences of both travelers and local folks are equally accepted and tolerated. In my opinion, however, acceptance of the differing cultures is more beneficia...
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Sentence: To begin with, some people think that travelers from another country should observe the uniqueness of the the traditional practices and behavior of the local people.
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Sentence: ...fully express himself for who he is as a person and his own customs without being judged and alienated.
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