Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
new Roman","serif"; mso-ansi-language:EN-US">The world is changing fast, so are the preferences and habits of the people. While some people believe that changing has a positive effect which provides new experiences, instructive lessons, and awareness on their life, others, however, think that changing the way they live has a detrimental effect which they should avoid on their life. In this essay, I will examine both sides of argument and provide my overall opinion.
new Roman","serif"; mso-ansi-language:EN-US">From an overall perspective, there are two main reasons why people think that changing is a kind of process that people should avoid. The main reason of this is that they want to protect themselves from danger which includes new ideas, habits, or people. they think that every new thing comes to their life has a potential to harm them. According to my experiences, one of my friends defined herself as a “conservative”. she denies everything new in her life and tries to live a basic life. When I asked the reason why she preferred to be a conservative person, she answered she wanted to protect herself from new things which would transform her life into miserable situations. another reason is that changing may cause new difficulties in their life. Taking car as an example, if someone buys another car for a change, driving new car can be more difficult than previous one. As a result, for those who do not want anything new, change can have a negative impact on their life.
new Roman","serif"; mso-ansi-language:EN-US">Despite these arguments, there are also some people who think that change may provide new advantages in their life. The main advantage is new experiences which can be learnt by changing something. For instance, we can learn how to survive by using our camp experiences in any kind of urgent situation such as earthquake or flood. In addition this, people can be more awareness as they prefer to learn and live new things. Helping orphanage may provide you to be more knowledge and sensitive about charities. I strongly believe that we cannot learn everything we need on our own. so, sometimes someone needs to get into our life in order to learn what true is. Even though some changes cause some bad experiences, we should think it as a lesson that we should never do it again. if we had not tended to do it, how would have we learnt true one? so, it is imperative to act immediately before we regret our mundane life.
new Roman","serif"; mso-ansi-language:EN-US">In conclusion, it is clear that it is a topic which raises strong passions on both sides of argument. In some people’s opinion, doing same thing every day and avoiding change is a better idea due to damages of changes. however, others think that changing is an essential part of our life in terms of new experiences and awareness. I believe that life would be easier if we try to learn and live new things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 7.30460921844 301% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 67.0 24.0651302605 278% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2518.0 1615.20841683 156% => OK
No of words: 491.0 315.596192385 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1283095723 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.32435028558 2.80592935109 154% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474541751527 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 780.3 506.74238477 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2778570288 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8461538462 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8846153846 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186017166429 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611166231094 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562431341682 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138735942547 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0179140050858 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.