to some people studying the past has little value in the modern wold. why do you think it is impotent to do so? what will be the effect if children are not taught history? H

History tell us
History tells us

The nagetive impact on children not knowing about the past.
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Sentence: History tell us what happened in the past , also how leaders roled the countries.It also looks at the stragles that our early ancectors went to to have the life we live today .
Error: ancectors Suggestion: ancestors
Error: roled Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: stragles Suggestion: strangles

Sentence: Knowing the past is very importent for children.
Error: importent Suggestion: important

Sentence: Because it will teach them ,for example , about the early ancector and the way they roled the countries.
Error: roled Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: ancector Suggestion: ancestor

Sentence: Also the stratergies they used to solve their problem .
Error: stratergies Suggestion: strategies

Sentence: Furthermore the situation that they had to face in the past, and how they controled their impire .Therefore, this will teach the children how to deal with situation in the future .
Error: impire Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: controled Suggestion: controlled

Sentence: The nagetive impact on children not knowing about the past.They would not know what the country went to to become as it is now .
Error: nagetive Suggestion: native

Sentence: Also they would not know how to controle the situation, in the future , because history gives examples about the leaders , and how they faced the situation.Furthermore the children will not now why their country is unique , because they do not have idea about the past.
Error: controle Suggestion: control

Sentence: To sum up , it is importent to learn about the past , because it will help the children in the future .
Error: importent Suggestion: important

Sentence: Also they will appreciate what the early ansectors did to have the live we live today .
Error: ansectors Suggestion: sectors

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No. of Words: 226 350
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Score: 4.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 14 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 226 350
No. of Characters: 995 1500
No. of Different Words: 102 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.877 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.403 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.152 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 52 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 43 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 28 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 16 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.545 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.579 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.818 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.399 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.595 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.141 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5